BC1-1908 Homework - Ingrid Frank

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This is the thread where all my sketches and WIPs will be posted in :) 

I want to finish chapter 1 of the treasure chest tutorial first and will start to post progress for my homework afterwards. 

I decided to model the sword and I want to make it in a WOWish style.

Some deathknight runeswords I want to use as reference:

  • Dieter Alleweireldt(dieterweireldt) replied

    Love that you created your own concept art with your own style

  • Philipp Bauer(cruento) replied

    I love the chest and your concept art is breathtaking! You definitive increase my ambitions! 

  • Ingrid Frank(Fide) replied

    I need some help :/ 

    How do I get rid of these?  I always thought those only appear when I have Ngons ....

  • odunov replied

    @fide Have you made sure that you have no doubles and those faces are planar?

  • Ingrid Frank(Fide) replied

    @drgnclw I removed double vertices and I think that the faces are planar, but I´ll double check that again. Thank you!

  • Ingrid Frank(Fide) replied

    @drgnclw the faces are planar :/

    I made a retopology and the exact same issue occurs as soon as I extrude the faces to fill the space between the gaps :/


    SOLVED: The retopologized piece now looks as it should!!

  • jamesley replied

    @fide Good, I had seen your problem and I felt bad about not being able to help you xD

  • odunov replied

    @fide That's great. Keep going!

  • Ingrid Frank(Fide) replied

    The blade now looks as it should (without the detailing work which I will do on sunday) and now I started with the dragon skull. I scupted it first and will do a retopology of it. Mirroring didn´t work during sculpting, so I just deleted the left side, since I will mirror the right side anyway

  • smurfmier1985 replied

    @fide Nice progress! I like where it’s going, keep it up :)

  • Clint Johnson(clintjohnson) replied

    @fide \m/ looking really cool

  • Dieter Alleweireldt(dieterweireldt) replied

    @fide Love it, especially the skull. Never sculpted before myself so I'm always baffled when somebody can use it

  • Ingrid Frank(Fide) replied

    Homework Week 1 Submission

    Making the dragon head and figuring out how to make everything look connected were really hard, but I think it looks decent enough for now. I scrapped and changed some ideas while modelling. I made the part beneath the dragon head more square so it´s easier for me to connect it to the blade for example.

    I just added a few dents to the sword since I want to paint the majority, since is easier for me :)

  • spikeyxxx replied

    @fide Beautiful!

  • jamesley replied

    @fide Gg  :0

  • smurfmier1985 replied

    @fide awesome sword, can’t wait to see that dragon head textured :-D

  • Philipp Bauer(cruento) replied

    Just amazing!

  • Jack (jack07) replied

    @fide Great work! It's going to look amazing!

  • silentheart00 replied

    @fide Looking lit! 🔥  Good effort!

  • Kent Trammell replied

    @fide Sorry for the belated grade. Your custom sword design turned out great! I like that it's clearly inspired by the illustrations you posted at the start but it's still a unique design in the end. Completing the treasure chest and the sword as well you have earns you an A+ in my book.

    I only have 2 notes to offer:

    • The handle appears notably more simple compared to the dragon-skull cross guard and complex blade. It makes the handle look under-developed to me. A leather grip wrap would help I think.
    • There's another thing that's kinda hard to put my finger on. The artwork you posted has a definitive organic feel to the blades. I don't mean soft but at least a hand-made, nature-forged quality to them. And I see that theme in your sword as well, especially with the dragon skull crossguard. However a significant portion of the blade has a sci-fi hard surface feel to it (the area circled pink in the image below). I think it's the holes cut out in the blade and the left edge. Those in particular have a rigid straightness to them where the dragon skull and the right side of the blade with the dings have a more organic feel.
      Personally I find the two themes fighting each other in the design. I'd recommend maybe de-straightening the hole cutouts, possibly bevel them unevenly as well. Then add the same dents and dings from the right side to the left.