There's probably a lot more I could do to this, but I'm pretty happy with it now. I'm calling it finished for now.
I'd like to thank Adrian, BlanchSB, Omar, Lutz, and everybody who gave me feedback on my model, its materials, and especially the lighting.
I've still a ways to go on lighting and materials, but I'm pretty happy with how this turned out.
Contrast this with the old lighting setup and you can see how correcting one or two materials, like the windshield normals, getting a good lighting setup, and adding even just a little bit of detail can enhance a presentation.
The lighting fundamentals course really helped, though I still have a ways to go in my lighting journey.
Cheers Wardred, it looks much better now. Some good old lighting and composition and bam, the whole thing changes.
Thanks Omar.
I have to give you props for giving almost everybody who submits a bit of feedback. It takes time, but it's appreciated.