BC4-1810 Homework Mjans

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Here is my homework for BC4-1810

  • Kent Trammell replied

    mmjans Congrats on finishing submitting homework all 4 weeks! Your light match is close although yours seems to have more yellow in it than the source. Also our background gradient is more contrasted than than the source. Could be distracting. That's my only 2 note though. B+ from me.

    Your arch viz is a solid effort though I have some notes there too:

    • While I like the dramatic sun light casting interesting shadows on the kitchen, the extreme angle suggests a sunrise or sunset. In which case the sun needs to be tinted more toward orange. Also the fanning angle of the shadows seem like you're using an area light instead of a sunlight. Since the sun is so far away, the shadows tend to be straight without a noticeable fanning of shadow angles.
    • The wooden floor is in desperate need of reflectivity. Maybe raw wood floor exist in someone's house, but I've only ever seen finished floors, meaning polyurethaned. A) for looks but also B) for durability. That's to make a case that ALL wood floors should be reflective therefore. Even if it's subtle, I highly recommend adding some reflection to the wood floor and the ceiling beam.
    • The wallpaper / pattern on the walls look like denoising artifacts. Is the pattern also used on the cabinets? They're a little splotchy too. I'd recommend going with a solid color or a more artificial pattern rather than a "textured" wall look, just to avoid the confusion.

    Another B+ from me 👍

  • silentheart00 replied

    mmjans I agree with the other critiques.  It also looks like some ambient occlusion is missing in certain places in your archviz, like the feet of the chairs meeting the floor.