Im asking someone to prom with this render, and I need all the notes I can get. If you have knowlege of cute, Ghibi style characters, any help would be incredible. I've got 4 days left, and I know this is not a big thing in the long run, but it means a lot to me.
I think it is adorable :D
Super cute! I don't have much advice as I'm not too familiar with Ghibi style but I would turn the writing so its not going over his face :) Keep working at it, you are doing great