thank u very much Jonthan a really appreciate the feedback !
the initial render is a 4K but was to big to be posted here ! croping the image improve a lot the compessition! i allready increase the highlight , and add some glare , but as u said i may go furthur.
anywy i'm happy that u take the time to feedback my render, and again thank very much :)
Really cool render Malhomsi! I really dig the style, and the attention to detail is fantastic. You asked for some constructive feedback, so here are a few things that I think you could improve on here:
The resolution is quite small, and it makes it tough to accurately judge the materials and textures since they all appear a bit fuzzy. If you were to render again, try doubling the size.
There's a bit too much empty space to the right that isn't serving a purpose as far as I can tell. If you crop the right side a bit it looks more natural:http://imgur.com/KdtoWdU
Lastly, you can also safely increase your highlights a bit without blowing anything out. Might be personal preference, but you only have a limited amount of colors to work with so may as well use 'em:http://imgur.com/XwtDAaG
Mr. Eight-ball didn't fair so well after the poker game. I like how his cigarette is still smoking and his dapper countenance lingers though he is now just a skull.
thank u very much Jonthan a really appreciate the feedback !
the initial render is a 4K but was to big to be posted here ! croping the image improve a lot the compessition! i allready increase the highlight , and add some glare , but as u said i may go furthur.
anywy i'm happy that u take the time to feedback my render, and again thank very much :)
Really cool render Malhomsi! I really dig the style, and the attention to detail is fantastic. You asked for some constructive feedback, so here are a few things that I think you could improve on here:
The resolution is quite small, and it makes it tough to accurately judge the materials and textures since they all appear a bit fuzzy. If you were to render again, try doubling the size.
There's a bit too much empty space to the right that isn't serving a purpose as far as I can tell. If you crop the right side a bit it looks more natural: http://imgur.com/KdtoWdU
Lastly, you can also safely increase your highlights a bit without blowing anything out. Might be personal preference, but you only have a limited amount of colors to work with so may as well use 'em: http://imgur.com/XwtDAaG
thank u for ur comments ! i really apreciate it !
Holy balls, great work!
Mr. Eight-ball didn't fair so well after the poker game. I like how his cigarette is still smoking and his dapper countenance lingers though he is now just a skull.
I like it
This is amazing!