My First Facial Retopology Finished with Retopoflow 2.0. Can you review?

Better than anything I could make. Organic topology tends to elude me, but I'm impressed with the topology here.

aallworknoplay Definitely not bad for your first go.  You got several of the important loops (around the eyes, the mouth, the face), but here are a few suggestions.  The face count is probably higher than it needs to be.  It's not too high to animate by any means, but keeping things as simple as possible for as long as possible will help tremendously when modelling.  I would recommend googling face topology and get some examples of where the important loops are and where the poles are placed.  The loop that circumscribes the nose and mouth is an important one.  You will also commonly see the "raccoon mask" that circumscribes both eyes.  When you retopo, do the important loops first, then fill in the rest.  You have a couple of poles that are not optimally placed as well.  The six pole right in the middle of the forehead needs to be edited (try to never have any pole where more than five edges come together).  The poles in the cheek there would also likely cause some deformation problems.  Most of the time that five pole goes right at the tip of of the cheek bone.

Keep up the good work.  It gets easier with practice, like everything else.

to add a piece of info to the excellent crit John gave,

there are two kinds of poles that are useful beyond the already used 4 sided pole...

these are the 3 sided (nose pole) and the 5 sided (extrusion pole) 

they are both necessary (and work with each other)... 

all others are to be avoided for the sake of deformation...

Thank you very much for your valuable feedback especially John Sanderson.

Here is this same model with corrected retopology.

I would like to know what you think.

Thank you!

aallworknoplay hello there , it s a good retopo ! a lot better u have the main loops , most poles r in the good place ! keep the good work

aallworknoplay yes, very much the right way to go!!