BC4-1810 Homework, Yannis Sayeh

Collaborations

After a BIG week i can finally post this first work (i made it very simple cause i didn't had much time this week)



I gonna take some material courses i need to improve my skills a bit i guess, if i got time, i'll add some scratches to the car ^^


  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    hey good work . i like the lightning setup how you went with both same HDRI . maybe the night one could be a bit darker but i love it

  • silentheart00 replied

    Your truck shader looks good.  The day scene is nice and warm feeling.  The night scene is nice, too, but really bright for my taste.  Otherwise, good work.

  • Kent Trammell replied

    Overall, I'm getting a nice vibe from all your renders! I've got some notes the closer I look.

    With the daytime bedroom there's some curious quirks. See this image:

    On the upper side, I circled evidence of an area light toward the ceiling pointed downward. Seeing this evidence hurts the believability of the render. On the right side theres a noticeable glow behind the shutter. My guess is that this is coming from a lamp serving as sunlight from the direction of the purple arrow. The odd thing is that environment texture seen in the window suggest a sunlight source coming from the direction of the yellow arrow.

    I agree with silent that the night scene looks good just a little too bright. The lamps would have to be super intense to light the room that way.

    Nothing to say about the toy truck other than "great job!". Overall an A from me this week.