I did some tweaking - I think it is a bit better, i just need to address a couple of different issues now (patches, stiffness and a bit more work on the quiff) Thanks so much for your help! When I get it completely right I'll send you another pic
I went back to the drawing board and re-did the top quiff hair cards. I was going for an exaggerated, ultra textured, 'fashion hair' look. I'm still not completely happy but it is the closest I've come to what I wanted. All I can say is that all this tweaking has taught me HEAPS about hair cards/textures - so thank you!
It's looking really good, starry! I know how frustrating it is to redo work, but like you said, what you learn along the way is invaluable. Keep up the good work!