3D model of a bicycle. I am very proud of the color choice for the model. learned so much during the process. recently just finished lighting course, have used three point method to light the scene. would really appreciate feed back.
This is an awesome bicycle!
The only thing I would add, and this is only if somebody is riding on it, is to flatten the bottoms of the tires just a little, maybe bulge them out ever so slightly, to represent the weight they're carrying. That seems a kind of advanced technique, especially for animating, but it'll prevent the bike looking like it's gliding over surfaces.
thanks for the feedback, that would really add some realistic details to the model.
Omar Domenech(Dostovel)
Hello Patel. Very good results you got there man. They only feedback I would give is that materials are too smooth, there are no surface imperfection. You can try adding more detail, decals, dirt, etc. Maybe also get an extra render or two. Get a close up shot with depth of field on so you get some of that nice cinematic blurred background, so parts of the bike are out of focus and the part you really want to show is in focus. Experiment a bit with different shots, get the bike almost in darkness except for one light that really shines from the back creating some powerful rim light, that's always very dramatic. Remember, it's not only doing the cool model, but the presentation of it by achieving good composition and aesthetics.
Thank you Omar for detailed feedback, I will definitely play around with different lights and composition.
I am just too scared of materials 😀😅 I am working on it.
Thanks again.
Oh, and I'd select a cover image for your project.
Without one the community just sees a broken link in the gallery.
thank you for doing that!
This is an awesome bicycle!
The only thing I would add, and this is only if somebody is riding on it, is to flatten the bottoms of the tires just a little, maybe bulge them out ever so slightly, to represent the weight they're carrying. That seems a kind of advanced technique, especially for animating, but it'll prevent the bike looking like it's gliding over surfaces.
thanks for the feedback, that would really add some realistic details to the model.
Hello Patel. Very good results you got there man. They only feedback I would give is that materials are too smooth, there are no surface imperfection. You can try adding more detail, decals, dirt, etc. Maybe also get an extra render or two. Get a close up shot with depth of field on so you get some of that nice cinematic blurred background, so parts of the bike are out of focus and the part you really want to show is in focus. Experiment a bit with different shots, get the bike almost in darkness except for one light that really shines from the back creating some powerful rim light, that's always very dramatic. Remember, it's not only doing the cool model, but the presentation of it by achieving good composition and aesthetics.
Thank you Omar for detailed feedback, I will definitely play around with different lights and composition.
I am just too scared of materials 😀😅 I am working on it.
Thanks again.