ttobioreo hi tobioreo, good start! Here's some feedback for you:
your arcs are a bit flat at the top, gives it a floaty feeling. A tip I got from Wayne when I struggled with this one myself: mute the horizontal movement. Then focus on the bounces alone first. They should be just like the vanilla bounces, only less high each time. Also the first bounce is a half bounce, so it should have the same timing to it. If can help to add a key frame in the negative so you can actually see the full arc. Remember, they should be nice parabolas.
After that turn on the horizontal movement again and start tweaking. In your case it's traveling to far, you can't see the end. Try reducing the distance it travels. Also don't forget about the ending wobble.
This one is pretty difficult and you're doing great so far, it's awesome that you're seeking feedback and are applying it, that's the best way to learn. Good luck :)
yyukinoh1989 ok, here is an update version with all the fixes you told me about... I dunno if the x-axis is alright since I try to make it as consistent "straight" line but yeah. .
dont worry . well it all are small mistakes but it will affect a lot . (also in
image 3 you will see i moved there the blue curve the way it should be more . (of course only moving that wont make a good arc thats why the red line also needs to be fixed)
animation sure aint easy but its fun and i am sure in time you will be really great . and if you need more help or have questions feel free to ask me .
i am glad its helpfull :)
http://g2f.nl/02879ae http://g2f.nl/0l7bh3u http://g2f.nl/0jx6iop http://g2f.nl/0fa3omj ok so here i took notes of the things i still see that could use improvement .
do note i still am learning so there might be some more spots but these are the ones i see .
some extra info i put in here
in the first picture everyting is explained .
second picture
so i said to more it to the right but also move it a bit more up. what i do is using the grid to compare if they are somehow on the same spot.
image 3 no more info needed here
image 4. i might drawed the problems area more then they are but its to make clear what the problem is . like at 1 its too pointy while it should be a nice curve. and the second one is having a mirrored S shape . try to make it a nice bow too.
i hope this info helps if you still have questions feel free to ask me .
ill leave the editing over to you now to see if you understand what i mean :)
well you could upload the .blend file youre working in onto a site like airload or dropbox . there are a lot of sites that offer upload options . i always used airload so far. and no worry we are there to help each other right :) still need to learn a lot but i gladly help you out
yyukinoh1989 h'm damn miss the red line mistake.
also how do I share the file with you, so you can paint it over? It will be a big help to see it visual and reading what you said ^^"
(I watched the second one you linked to in the comments)
ttobioreo hi tobioreo, good start! Here's some feedback for you:
your arcs are a bit flat at the top, gives it a floaty feeling. A tip I got from Wayne when I struggled with this one myself: mute the horizontal movement. Then focus on the bounces alone first. They should be just like the vanilla bounces, only less high each time. Also the first bounce is a half bounce, so it should have the same timing to it. If can help to add a key frame in the negative so you can actually see the full arc. Remember, they should be nice parabolas.
After that turn on the horizontal movement again and start tweaking. In your case it's traveling to far, you can't see the end. Try reducing the distance it travels. Also don't forget about the ending wobble.
This one is pretty difficult and you're doing great so far, it's awesome that you're seeking feedback and are applying it, that's the best way to learn. Good luck :)
yyukinoh1989 ok, here is an update version with all the fixes you told me about... I dunno if the x-axis is alright since I try to make it as consistent "straight" line but yeah. .
https://youtu.be/P-fXLzWo00E
and in case here the link to the file update again in case you want to see if there are anymore errors. https://drive.google.com/open?id=1yCFcvzNptMB31xjCJFi2vfeYkfSRm89Y
dont worry . well it all are small mistakes but it will affect a lot . (also in
image 3 you will see i moved there the blue curve the way it should be more . (of course only moving that wont make a good arc thats why the red line also needs to be fixed)
animation sure aint easy but its fun and i am sure in time you will be really great . and if you need more help or have questions feel free to ask me .
i am glad its helpfull :)
yyukinoh1989
lol read more as move so don't worry xD jajaja it happens
hmm, going over the notes...so many mistake, but will try to pull it off with your notes which are really helpful!!
edit with comment on the second i meant
so i said to more > should be MOVE (miswrited xD )
http://g2f.nl/02879ae
http://g2f.nl/0l7bh3u
http://g2f.nl/0jx6iop
http://g2f.nl/0fa3omj
ok so here i took notes of the things i still see that could use improvement .
do note i still am learning so there might be some more spots but these are the ones i see .
some extra info i put in here
in the first picture everyting is explained .
second picture
so i said to more it to the right but also move it a bit more up. what i do is using the grid to compare if they are somehow on the same spot.
image 3 no more info needed here
image 4. i might drawed the problems area more then they are but its to make clear what the problem is . like at 1 its too pointy while it should be a nice curve. and the second one is having a mirrored S shape . try to make it a nice bow too.
i hope this info helps if you still have questions feel free to ask me .
ill leave the editing over to you now to see if you understand what i mean :)
yyukinoh1989
I use the google drive thing if it's ok
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1UBS14Q0COnzfFL4nO6Mud0Jaxzkpiq0L
see if it works?
true that :) and super thanks =D
well you could upload the .blend file youre working in onto a site like airload or dropbox . there are a lot of sites that offer upload options . i always used airload so far. and no worry we are there to help each other right :) still need to learn a lot but i gladly help you out
yyukinoh1989 h'm damn miss the red line mistake.
also how do I share the file with you, so you can paint it over? It will be a big help to see it visual and reading what you said ^^"
Either way thanks very much for the tips!!!