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    Could you check my model, please?

    Question Modeling
    Muzan

    Hi! 
    I finished the CG Cookie logo lesson and I thought to make an exercise to see if I grasped things correctly. I would like to have it checked, if possible!
    I don't know if the images are enough, or if I have to send the file itself

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    • Omar Domenech replied

      Yeah you can post images and wireframes or the model. And also if you want to you can post a link of the .blend file as well. Either is fine.

    • Muzan replied

      Here's the link to the file in this case!
      https://easyupload.io/zil70q

    • Martin Bergwerf replied

      Hi Muzan,

      The model looks great!

      Your Normals are flipped (SHIFT+N to fix that), which doesn't really matter in this case, but still.

      The Plane is Z-fighting with the fairy, not visible from the camera view, but just movibg it back a touch would help.

      Personally, I would have Beveled at least the inner edgeloop, instead of using a single holding edge:

      Fairy.png

      That would also improve the transition of the materials.

      But all in all, it's really well done (and all quads as well!).

    • Muzan replied
      I didn't think to check the normals' direction as things were looking good, I'm taking note to check them anyway next time!
      I tried the bevel instead of the edge loop as you suggested and I can see the difference between the two, with the bevel the result looks much better!
      :D Thank you for the feedback, it's very helpful!
    • Omar Domenech replied

      That is a very cool looking logo. I love the red and silver combination and all the interesting shapes and flows. Also excellent modeling, you didn't waste geometry. I'd say the model is checked and passed with A++