Hi jimmack! Thanks for commenting. I do appreciate you pointing things out to me. I can't say I saw any of those issues while working on her, which makes me want to kick myself! ^_^ I also can't say I was hiding her hands, as it was the pose I was going for... I see what you mean about the background. It makes it a bit much of the tan color overall.
Anyway, thanks again! :)
Nice. I like the expression. Proportions look pretty reasonable. Good pose and nice hair.
A couple of minor criticisms if I may...
It looks like you were a bit heavy with the eraser around her bum (or butt, depending on where you're from :-) ) It looks a bit angular and the top of her thigh looks a little thin. That's also made her pants look like they're painted onto her skin rather than being clothing.
I see you're hiding her hands :-D Force yourself to practice them :-) A hint more anatomy on the arms would also really make it better.
Lastly, I'm not sure about the background. Personally, I found it a little distracting. It may be that the colour palette is too similar to the character, but I'm not great artist, so I'm not sure what to say about that.
Just some thoughts, hope that they're helpful.
Hi jimmack! Thanks for commenting. I do appreciate you pointing things out to me. I can't say I saw any of those issues while working on her, which makes me want to kick myself! ^_^ I also can't say I was hiding her hands, as it was the pose I was going for... I see what you mean about the background. It makes it a bit much of the tan color overall.
Anyway, thanks again! :)
Nice. I like the expression. Proportions look pretty reasonable. Good pose and nice hair.
A couple of minor criticisms if I may...
It looks like you were a bit heavy with the eraser around her bum (or butt, depending on where you're from :-) ) It looks a bit angular and the top of her thigh looks a little thin. That's also made her pants look like they're painted onto her skin rather than being clothing.
I see you're hiding her hands :-D Force yourself to practice them :-) A hint more anatomy on the arms would also really make it better.
Lastly, I'm not sure about the background. Personally, I found it a little distracting. It may be that the colour palette is too similar to the character, but I'm not great artist, so I'm not sure what to say about that.
Just some thoughts, hope that they're helpful.