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CG COOKIE SCULPT Shark _submission Final

Hi @theluthier Thank you for taking the time to teaching us sculpting. I enjoy to sculpt the shark :D i had so diffitulties to sculpt but starting again with you tutorial. Please fibd my end result of my sculpting shark. thank you all for the super work you are giving us to learn more about blender. ps sorry i dont use sketchFab -i submit my application in here . if it is ok
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  • @theluthier Thank you , i will improve it and send it again thank you

  • Kent Trammell(theluthier)

    Wonderful result yyas! Overall it looks like it probably works well from all angles and I can definitely recognize the shark from the art!

    My only notes are 1) The gill lines look a bit under-defined. They need to have a little stair-step shape to them. Take a look at the example sculpt (from below or above) to see what I mean: https://skfb.ly/6QZBW

    2) The teeth look more like they're emerging out of the lips rather than from inside the mouth. Ideally the lip should be pressed against the teeth from the outside. This is tricky to achieve though.

    Ultimately I give these notes to keep in mind for future projects more than to suggest updating your sculpt. Just food for thought!

    Great work overall - an easy pass from me!