Hi Wil,
Not bad, but somewhat too bright overall, with so much 'white' empty space.
Also, the SSS seems a bit too'strong' (ie: the Scale is too high) and too reddish (the default Radius is meant for human skin and lets more red light through than green and blue). Candles don't tend to have blood vessels that would cause that red tint.
The glass is a bit boring, but that is probably mainly because there isn't much to reflect (again: big, 'white', empty environment).
