Just checking out some of your work via your astronaut post. This is nice. A couple of nit picks
The most obvious is the glass has too much refraction - it just looks too thick and magnifying
The back brick wall texture doesn't quite work. It's too flat... maybe it's a wallpaper but it doesn't read like that - I reckon a more wallpaper like pattern would work better and maybe you could give it some v subtle texture so it's more wallpaper like in texture
The edge of the wooden desk doesn't have the highlight or bevel to make the 90 degree angle readable to the eye
Finally the pencils aren't quite right. I think there's not a hard enough angle to match the sharpening texture and it throws the eye.
Just checking out some of your work via your astronaut post. This is nice. A couple of nit picks
The most obvious is the glass has too much refraction - it just looks too thick and magnifying
The back brick wall texture doesn't quite work. It's too flat... maybe it's a wallpaper but it doesn't read like that - I reckon a more wallpaper like pattern would work better and maybe you could give it some v subtle texture so it's more wallpaper like in texture
The edge of the wooden desk doesn't have the highlight or bevel to make the 90 degree angle readable to the eye
Finally the pencils aren't quite right. I think there's not a hard enough angle to match the sharpening texture and it throws the eye.
Nice result Lewis. Congrats on finishing the exercise. 🤙🏼