Yes, third iteration is even better. Maybe the background is a little dark. I'd say experiment with the lighting a bit. Not as if they are deep in the ocean, but more close to the surface? But if you're tired of working on this, it's also fair to just move onto different things. Thanks for doing the challenge and heeding the feedback Martin. I appreciate that.
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Yeah I liked the back dark thinking on the emission light on the jellyfish, maybe it makes sense that the ones that are luminescent live a bit deeper in the ocean? More research is needed (? Hahah
I think I'm going to leave it be and move on to the sand dunes course :)
Thank you again for the feedback and corrections!
Omar Domenech(Dostovel)
Hmmm, I'm glad the challenge was accepted, I like the new version, though your first render looks better I'd say. I am holding on to the Jellyfish Master belt for now. If you look at the other two submissions, they looks so neat and the contrast makes them pop. The lighting on the background makes it feel very alive and all the changes and subtle color variations in the translucency is a killer touch. Sorry if I'm being a little strident, just trying to give some positive feedback. I think I'm seeing the future and looking at a third jellyfish render....
This is very good feedback! Thanks a lot :) I'll look into it!
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I like it a lot more now, I have to keep training my eyes hehe, thanks again!
Omar Domenech(Dostovel)
Cool. There's two other jellyfish renders from a while back in the gallery. Those guys changed the composition and colors a bit and got awesome results. I dare you Mister Martin to try and do the same. Give me a new approach to this exercise and you will be the jellyfish master.
Yes, third iteration is even better. Maybe the background is a little dark. I'd say experiment with the lighting a bit. Not as if they are deep in the ocean, but more close to the surface? But if you're tired of working on this, it's also fair to just move onto different things. Thanks for doing the challenge and heeding the feedback Martin. I appreciate that.
:D
Yeah I liked the back dark thinking on the emission light on the jellyfish, maybe it makes sense that the ones that are luminescent live a bit deeper in the ocean? More research is needed (? Hahah
I think I'm going to leave it be and move on to the sand dunes course :)
Thank you again for the feedback and corrections!
Hmmm, I'm glad the challenge was accepted, I like the new version, though your first render looks better I'd say. I am holding on to the Jellyfish Master belt for now. If you look at the other two submissions, they looks so neat and the contrast makes them pop. The lighting on the background makes it feel very alive and all the changes and subtle color variations in the translucency is a killer touch. Sorry if I'm being a little strident, just trying to give some positive feedback. I think I'm seeing the future and looking at a third jellyfish render....
This is very good feedback! Thanks a lot :) I'll look into it!
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I like it a lot more now, I have to keep training my eyes hehe, thanks again!
Cool. There's two other jellyfish renders from a while back in the gallery. Those guys changed the composition and colors a bit and got awesome results. I dare you Mister Martin to try and do the same. Give me a new approach to this exercise and you will be the jellyfish master.
Hahaha challenge accepted!