Awesome! I have always wanted to try low poly illustration and this is really cool, especially the way the triangles create a hex pattern. I particularly like the star field. One thing stands out to me though, until I enlarged the image the buildings looked a little like pencils sticking out. Did you consider grayer tones? Not sure how reflective surfaces would look here (as you see in modern skylines) but its another idea.
Hello Murray, about your question of gray tones, i consider is not necessary here, because is happening a dawn, in the part of the city, so if you search some images in google, you would can see that the buildings have yellow tones. For example in this one: http://www.maxxelli-properties.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/Shanghai-Skyline-golden-hour.jpg
The gray tones is more useful for scenes at midday.
Awesome! I have always wanted to try low poly illustration and this is really cool, especially the way the triangles create a hex pattern. I particularly like the star field. One thing stands out to me though, until I enlarged the image the buildings looked a little like pencils sticking out. Did you consider grayer tones? Not sure how reflective surfaces would look here (as you see in modern skylines) but its another idea.