A pair of roses Final

I`m not an English speaker and almost forget what I learned in school. Please let me know if I use obviously wrong or awkward expressions. I`m overcome by the quality and ideas of submitted arts but I`ll challange. I don`t want to make my sweat and times I spent into a waste. It was worthwhile time because I have not drawn subjects like flower, princess or dress. ————————————————- Here`s a pair of rose princesses – white and pink. The white rose princess; Her mind is pure and clear. she see straight forward. Her attitude is dignified. Though her tender smile, she looks defensive and rigid a bit. The veil of purity is casting shadow on her face. Her satin-like white dress is covering her whole body. The color of champagne rose is very beautiful but it`s too pink. So I painited her dress and roses with ivory white. The pink rose princess; The warm wind of love is blowing. Her dress and bright red hair swirling liker her heart. She`s barely covered. Her feet and arms are bare, even dress is too sheer. She touches blushed cheek but doesn`t avoid or deny her emotion. She`s just stepping to her adventure of love.